Effective
Dialogue:
Effective dialogue sounds natural.
It conveys the sense of real speech, but is more
structured than the meanderings of daily speech.
Effective dialogue is more economic and direct than
real-life conversation. It moves definitely more
quickly. The tone of dialogue is obviously
conversational-as opposed to literary and theatrical.
Its rhythms and diction seem more naturalistic than
stage dialogue.
Implicit
Dialogue:
In film, words are used for their
implicit rather than explicit meaning. What is
important in dialogue is the meaning being conveyed in
the circumstances of the scene, no the literal meaning
of the words used. What is left unsaid can be as
important as what is said. Try to avoid the
on-the-nose dialogue. On-the-nose is derisive phrase
that refers to dialogue that is too blunt, direct,
explicit. While this may seem like a good way to get
a point across, it can restrict audience participation
in identifying what is going on behind the words. Your
dialogue will be stronger if you consciously try to
avoid writing on-the-nose dialogue. Underwrite rather
than overwrite. Be subtle rather than heavy-handed.
And go easy on the adjectives; they can overload the
intended meaning.
Individualized
Dialogue:
Dialogue should fit the character-their
mood and emotions in the particular situation. It
should have the rhythm and individual form of expression
typical of the character. Dialogue should sound like
the character and not like you the writer. Character's
speeches should also differentiate the characters from
each other. See if you can identify their dialogue
styles and rhythms, their voice patters, their favorite
words and expressions, and their non-verbal means of
communicating.
One way to individualize characters
is to give them favorite expressions and dialogue styles.
Try switching some dialogue around. Imagine one
character's lines being spoken by another character.
If speeches can be switched without any problem, they
probably aren't individualized enough.
Credible
Dialogue:
Dialogue fits the situation and
emotion of the moment. In a time of emotional stress,
a character will be less coherent, less able to speak
in concise, formal prose. Consider the following:
- Context and Intention-Meaning in dialogue is dependent on both the context in which it is spoken and the intent behind the words.
- Underwrite-Dialogue is best when underwritten and understated. We can get turned off by characters spouting platitudes or being excessively melodramatic.
- Avoid Cliches-Try to avoid tired truism and cliches. They are attractive as shortcuts to quickly convey meaning, but they are also stale and will give your dialogue this same feeling.
- Subtext-What is important is what's being communicated-the meaning being expressed. In film dialogue, as in life, the actual meaning often lies beneath the surface meaning. This is the subtext. It may be intentional, it may be unconscious, it may be a hidden agenda that the character is trying to cover up.
Dialogue
Techniques:
Voice-Over Narration-This is
sometimes used so set, unify and illuminate the story.
It can supply a certain objectivity if the narrator is
not a character or a personal touch if the narrator is
a character.
Offscreen Dialogue-Much can be done
with offscreen dialogue. At its simplest, it merely
conveys the presence of another character, but it can
also be used more stylistically.
Overlapping Dialogue-We usually think
of dialogue as alternating between characters, but
dialogue can also overlap, producing rhythmic, realistic
effects or a comic feel.
Modifying Distance-The way in which
we hear dialogue doesn't have to approximate the
distance we are from the speakers. Sometimes we see
the characters in very long shots while their dialogue
sounds as if they were nearby.