The Scene:
A scene is a unit containing a
single and continuous dramatic action unified by time,
space, content, concept, character, theme, or motif.
While it could conceivably be a single shot a scene is
usually a cohesive series of related shots.
PLANNING YOUR SCENES:
Before writing a scene you should
consider the following characteristics:
- Purpose-refers to how the scene functions in the
story. Is it meant to tag a character, set a mood, or
introduce a locale.
- Internal Scene Structure (suspense and surprise)-
points to an important quality of scenes-they are as
carefully structured as a story line, and include a
beginning middle, and end.
- Characters appearing in the scene interact with
each other. Each character wants something in the
scene; tension comes from conflicting objectives.
Typically one character's perspective leads a scene;
the scene develops from their point of view.
- Tension/Conflict-is significant because it can make
most scenes more effective. This also applies to
tension that is friendly or humorous.
- Relationship to other scenes-includes the rhythm
and flow among the scenes and transitions between them.
- Setting and Staging-can do a lot to add interest
and atmosphere to a scene.
WHAT DO SCENES DO:
Most scenes advance the story; they
realize a beat in the story line. They may introduce a
problem or resolve one, or they may introduce a
complication. Scenes will introduce characters,
present exposition (to fill in the back story), deliver
some relevant information, establish a setting, create
a mood, reveal character relationships, or express a
theme. They could also present a comic relief, after a
scene with lots of tension, short transition scenes,
time transitions, and the often used for trailers,
money scenes, actions that are overly exiting.
INTERNAL SCENE STRUCTURE:
The typical structure, beginning,
middle and an end, is often used to internally
construct your scene. You must also give your scene
a sense of completion. A surprise twist is always
welcome to keep the audience guessing during each
scene. Similarly, a reversal of position or fortune
adds spice to a scene. Try to enter the scene late,
unless you wanted to. Don't show all the preliminaries,
just get to the point of attack. In every scene,
always leave an unresolved element so that the
transition between scenes would have an element of
suspense.
Sequences are not always continuous
in space and time. A scene sequence can similarly
develop discontinuously in space. Always consider the
pace of each scene. How quickly should it move? How
short should the dialog segment be? The tone and mood
of a scene will reflect the film as a whole, as well as
the purpose and content of the particular scene. In
dialogue scenes it is a good idea to have the character
doing something. This can avoid the problem of talking
heads.
SCENE ATTITUDE/POINT OF VIEW:
Whose scene is it? Usually a
particular character's presence dominates the screen-to
one degree or another. Their attitude and point of
view leads the scene. Subjective perspectives can be
striking if not overdone. Make sure you give the scene
to the right character.
SCENE SUSPENSE AND SURPRISE:
Suspense is generated when the
audience is lead to anticipate an exciting development
or payoff. Suspense frequently follows this
cue-delay-fulfillment (payoff) pattern. The audience
is cued to some impending action that is then delayed.
We are kept hanging and our tension builds. Then come
the payoff, and hopefully it is more surprising than
what we expected. Play around with what the audience
knows and of what your characters know.
Manipulating Knowledge: Letting the
audience know something the character doesn't is a way
to create suspense. We wait for the character either
to find out or face the consequences. Much of our
pleasure is anticipating the character's reaction to
find out what we already know. The Payoff: The payoff
should justify the suspenseful build up to it. Try
including a surprise-something we don't expect.